A few words from me..
I started writing this story and posted it several months ago, and I wrote this Part Two to go along with it, but have never found the time to post this. If you have forgotten or haven’t read part one, go read it, so you can know what’s going on. So at long last, I finish the cliffhanger and it doesn’t go as you would think….
The actual story now
Zein screamed. Well as close to a scream a spider can get. Rama rolled her eyes. Zein then took another look at the creature. It was much smaller than a human (maybe a little larger than himself) and enveloped in a brownish fur. It had a lengthy peach tail and four little pink feet. Zein struggled to think of something to describe this unusual creature. All of a sudden, Rama started chuckling.
“It’s only a rat,” she said between giggles.
“Why would a rat be here of all places?” Zein wondered.
“It was probably attracted here by all the food clutter you have in your section of the web!” Rama teased.
Zein could not help feeling that there was something missing. Or was it someone. Terror flashed across Rama’s eyes which indicated she was thinking the same thing Zein was.
It was about dinner time. And there would only be one spider who would arrive early to ensure he got to eat as much as possible. And as Zein scanned the room, he was nowhere to be found.
Where was Jude???
“The way I’m conceiving this, the rat ate Jude, and we’re next,” Zein whispered.
“Rats do not usually eat spiders,” Rama replied, noticeably deep in her thought.
“Then what could the rat be doing here?” Zein queried.
Rama’s eyes widened in fear. “It might have come to warn us.”
“Why would it come to-” Zein cut himself off when he observed the door. For a change it was open. Wide open. And in the crack of light stood a figure out of Zein’s worst nightmares. A range of emotions crashed through him. Terror. Confusion. Worry. But everything faded when Zein saw what was in the figure’s hand. It was a trembling, wide-eyed Jude.
A note from me
This is usually the scariest part in the story. But usually a reader does not grasp the entire plot at this point. In this case, it’s how Jude ended up in the figure’s hand. So I’m here to guide you, as we are now going back around an hour before Zein and Rama saw the figure carrying Jude, but this time, it will be from Jude’s perspective.
Back to the story
Jude had gotten quite a selection today. In his web next to the grimy window, dedicated to catching unsuspecting flies, he had caught fifteen flies. That was more than usual. His stomach growled. Surely Rama and Zein wouldn’t mind if he ate just one of them would they?
Clunk. Clunk.
Jude jumped. He nearly screamed, but he managed to keep it in. He looked around. This is when Jude came to the realisation, he had never really taken in his surroundings in all his years at the room, but now looking up, he saw a vent.
Clunk. Clunk. Clunk.
The sound was definitely coming from the vent. Jude’s memories flooded back of Rama telling Zein to ensure that he never goes in that vent.
Curiosity got the better of Jude. He scuttled up the wall. Jude barely managed to squeeze himself in the largest crevice of space the vent had, but he was in. Jude searched all around, left and right, looking for the source of the clunking sound. Nothing. Then it came. Scurrying around was a rat. Jude gasped, softly, but the rat came on over to him quickly.
“What are you doing here?” asked Jude. Then he mentally cursed himself. Rats couldn’t talk. Only spiders and humans could. But the rat seemed to prove him wrong.
“There are humans nearby. I knew there were spiders here, so I wanted to alert them before the humans used their poisons to kill you,” the rat replied, in an effortless English. “But I suppose I have already warned you, so you can tell the others. I might steal their food, then I need to flee before they kill me too.”
“Hold on, you’re stealing food?” Jude asked, mouth wide open. He knew how mad Rama would be at him if she found him missing and he came back later with a full stomach. But it would be exhilarating. Jude had not left the room for years. He craved adventure. Once he attempted to persuade his cowardly, messy brother (Zein) to explore the house with him, but Zein had refused. Jude really shouldn’t have been that surprised. “Count me in,” he told the rat.
“Really?” the rat asked. “I would love the help! What is your name?”
“My name is Jude,” Jude responded. “You?”
“My name is Remy,” the rat Remy said. “Follow me, and we can get that food. You can return to your kind later.”
As Jude followed Remy across all the twists and turns of the ventilation system, he forgot all the things he should have worried about, like the imminent threat toward his siblings, or how they could have evacuated the building, but he shrugged it off. He was grateful for the change of pace and he embraced it.
“There it is,” Remy’s hushed voice broke Jude out of his giddy trance. Jude looked down and his mouth watered. It wasn’t necessarily food a spider would always eat. but its colours and irresistible smell seemed appetising enough. “Follow me,” Remy whispered, crawling down the wall and concealing himself behind some sort of jar.
Jude copied him, feeling his heart patter with excitement and nervousness as he peeked around to observe what was around him. a little, clean table with two cushioned seats was there. There was a big, dark box with a translucent front, and some sort of stove and a pan on a stove. There were many small countertops, with a wide variety of colourful, delicious foods.
Jude’s life had been a lie.
“Grab what you can,” Remy said, running across the counter and sinking his teeth into a yellow round thing. Jude scurried across, intending to catch up, then he froze.
Thump. Thump. Thump.
Remy gasped and went to hide, but Jude was still frozen.
Thump. Thump.
“Tarek, are you sure you want to live here?” a woman’s voice asked.
“Yes I’m sure,” a man who Jude assumed was called Tarek, replied. “You never change Reem, endless complaining since when we were younger.”
“Well, our parents say if I’m not here to keep you in line, you would be dead.” the woman (probably Reem) retorted.
Thump. Thump. Thump.
“Jude, move!” Remy hissed. “You have time!”
But Jude was paralysed with fear. He was barely seeing what was in front of him. Jude could barely hear Remy as he started to whisper-shout for Jude to hide or run away.
Thump. Thump.
“I’ll get your siblings so they can help,” Remy said, then took off.
All of a sudden, Jude snapped back to reality just as two siblings (Jude assumed they were Tarek and Reem) marched in. Obviously the first thing they saw was a frozen Jude.
“AHHHHHHH,” screamed Reem, jumping on a chair. “SPIDER!”
But Tarek seemed fascinated. He picked Jude up, and held him up on one leg. Jude wiggled his legs, anything to be free of his death grip.
“Reem, I think I know where this spider, and possibly more would come from,” he said, still staring at Jude.
“Well get rid of them all!” Reem squealed.
Thump. Thump. Thump.
As Jude was being carried up, he hoped that Remy would have warned someone about what was going on. Maybe if he didn’t survive, at least Rama and Zein could have fled. They could start over elsewhere.
Thump. Thump. Thump.
The room where Jude assumed he’d been living in for years was quickly approaching. He hoped at least Rama and Zein would be safe as Tarek ripped open the door.
Another note from me
Don’t worry- this is my last little message for you. But now that we know what happened between Jude and the rat, the story can resume where we’ve left off, from Zein’s perspective.
Back to the story
“Ah, so you took my idiot brother,” Rama said, addressing the man holding Jude. “Thank you Tarek.”
“Wait, what?” Zein knew Rama hated humans. Her number one rule was to never talk to them. So why was she talking to them.
“Your plan was foolproof, Rama,” a woman said approaching the room and standing by the doorway. “And they really didn’t suspect a thing?”
“Not a thing, Reem,” Rama smirked at Zein. “They’re stupid and they never listen to me. So they never notice when I sneak out to talk to you and Tarek.”
“Why would you do this?” Jude asked, but the man (Tarek?!) shook his hand and Jude immediately fell silent.
“Someday we’ll all learn my story,” Rama said. “Jenna still needs to post a little spinoff for me on her blog. But for now, we can know that you two are the bane of my existence. I wanted more from my life. I wanted spiders to remember me many years from now. I wanted to cross the line and be friends with humans. So I met these two siblings one day, Reem and Tarek. They wanted to move in here so I struck a bargain. We could get rid of you two so they could live in peace, and in exchange I get to live here and explore the city with them.”
“Now we never have to worry about spiders again!” Reem added. It’s a win-win!”
“Pick Zein up Tarek,” Rama ordered.
Tarek took Zein in his hand and lifted him up so high, so that now he was parallel with Jude. Fear raced through Zein’s body so he tuned out all of Jude’s complaints and fights. But he jolted back when Rama said the most terrifying thing ever.
“Crush them Tarek,” Rama was practically cackling at this point.
“No,” Zein whispered, but it was too late. Tarek had clenched his fists, and he felt his legs break, and his body get smashed.
As Zein and Jude’s body parts and blood oozed all over Tarek’s parts, all Rama could do was have a laugh.
“They’re finally gone,” she said.
The End!!!
Well, for Zein and Jude anyway.